Yolnie Jean Baptiste-TS#15

On December 6th, I met with Mr. Faisel at Dirac to work on the final draft of his personal statement. There were fewer grammatical errors this time. He used several low-frequency words in the final draft, and I was very impressed by his writing skills. I don't expect him to know everything about grammar simply because I don't, But the progress he has made over the course of  seven weeks in quite noticeable and impressive.